Here's a little something I wrote the other day during Bio 2nd Period
Save The Savior
So much for deliverance, right, angel
Save the savior, she cried
But as she bowed her head and stared at the sky
She left me alone
Left me to die
Judas has nothing on you, babe
But I guess it's not as easy as we thought it would be
The bastard was bound to falter
When even love couldn't erase that scar
On your wrist or in the stars
Or in the sacrifice I'm leaving at the altar
I still think about the nights
Living warm inside of you
Never wanting to say goodbye
Now all I can say is, God have mercy on my crime
The sweetness of the flowers always fades with time
Just like you
3 comments:
heeey this is actually quite beautiful. i like it
angggggiiieeee panzy!!!!
Uhhh. Most of this is actually from How to Kill a Rockstar. Considering that that is my FAVORITE book, I don't take kindly to you taking the author's work and replacing lines and calling it your own poetry. Honestly, at least try to be original -- write something inspired off of the lyrics, don't plagiarize it like a dick.
The original lyrics are so much better, anyway. They likely have more heart and soul than you could ever inject into your own literary works. That's probably why you plagiarized it.
Ah, I can't actually expect you to try and be original, lul. Why would you be, when you can just grab published work and play it off as your own? Oh, right...because it's against the law.
Post a Comment